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'my Man' in the five senses

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Your body is so warm and soft that I could never be cold when you hold me.
I feel safe when we are hugging.

Your eyes are like everchanging gemstones which I so long to wear in a ring on my finger.  They are more beautiful than the most valuable diamond.
I would pay millions to have such a jewel in my posession.

Your mouth tastes so sweet that I almost wish I could never taste mortal food again.
I wish there were a candy in that flavor.

Your scent fills my nostrils when I am near you and makes me wish I could taste it.
I inhale deeply, wanting to get high.

Your voice is my lullaby.
I can hear it as I drift through my dreams at night.

And I love you so that I can feel, see, taste, smell, and hear you even when you are not with me.
This is a poem that I wrote about my boyfriend. His eyes constantly change color, he smells like cats, ciggarettes, and the cologne that he uses and his body temperature is extremely high. That may not seem so great to you but I am in love with this freak. My aunt read this poem and made me laugh by saying it made her want to eat him.
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filiathemacewielder's avatar
dude,...when you put it that way i wish he was MY boyfriend,....but scince I know him and don't put it that way my self,..he's all your's. ^_^